(Time to open the story book of my life)
Adab ki saleeb par, usulon ki keelon se, khaamoshi ka taaj pehne,
main thaa
Ashk aankhon se, ghamgheen dilon se siskiyaan, un chubhte kaanton ka chor,
main thaa...
Main vahi hun jiski dhundhlaai aankhon mein kuch dhundte they tum
Meri laparvah hansi, phir usmein vajah dhundte they tum...
Tumhein talaash thi apni, aur main to chhupaane mein maahir tha
Zindagi ki gard se, gairon ki nigaahon se, khudko khud se...
Wakt guzarta gaya aur ek ajeeb kahaani banti gayi
Maykade ke khandahar pe koi nayi masjid banti gayi...
Aatishparast hun ab bhi, sajda jaari hai azal se
Yun to kabka bujh gaya jo tha mera khuda azal se...
Manzar alag hai, garm hai hawa bhi kuch kal ke baad
Ajnabi se hain main aur tu, kuch faasla hai kal ke baad...
Kabka rokar jaa chuka tere zaane pe woh, lekin ab bhi
Geela hai aansuon se tera girebaan, lekin ab bhi...
(Are these names on the wall...)
BEAUTIFUL.....I DON'T KNOW WHY..BUT IT BRING TEARS IN MY EYES...U HAVE A VERY GOOD TALENT.. KEEP IT UP..
ReplyDeletecontinue....this only summed up in the name of LOVE....
ReplyDeletefeel love!
give love!
It reminds me my past feelings for someone very special....
ReplyDeletevery emotionally written, "Adab ki saleeb pe.....kannto ka chor main tha".
wow...How brilliantly you have put the both sided feelings in this four lines...Amazing.
I loved every single expressive lines,though its sad to know for someone that how unknown and inexpressive his love was.
"Kabka rokar jaa chuka tere zaane pe woh, lekin ab bhiGeela hai aansuon se tera girebaan, lekin ab bhi... "
This lines are full of feelings from heart gives a sense that,people gets old ,but love never gets old ,but it grow and become more strong and mature than ever before no matter how far they are..
YAA I agree,
"Feel love"
"Give love"
And
"Express love"
(Before ITs too late)
Great Poem!!!
Its Rocking!!
Your poetry moves me! Its amazing! Keep writing...my heart finds resonance in ur words.
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