ARE YOU STILL THERE?

Once there lived a man,
Vain, conceited, full of pride,
His life, though jewelled by glorious deeds,
Love had not been on his side.

He was true, he tried being chaste,
He looked for signs of Cupid's strike,
But all bent on him for selfish needs,
None his innocent heart did like.

He longed for a friend true to him,
A girl who could stand by him,
Someone really willing to understand,
And like his every silly whim.

So, he lived full of hope,
Waiting for her to appear,
Everyday was a song of suspense,
Every night a tale of tears.

And then, after eternity she came,
Quietly, silently, without a word,
Time stopped, there was a pause,
Only two synchronised hearts were heard.

She took his hand and held it close,
He turned his face and wept,
He heard something of what she said,
And till the end like a promise kept.

11 comments:

  1. The most thing, I like about this post is the Title "Are You Still There".

    I love the way you express the story here.It fulfills the old saying that,

    "saccha pyar milna bahut mushkil hota hai ,kismat valo ko hi nasib hota hai" ...

    I am glad that man at last found his true love.sometimes it happens that even if you have all the good qualities in you,you won't find true love or may it was in front of you and you didn't realise it and when u realised it ,its too late.Also some people do find true love,they dont know how to take care of it.

    your story gives a message of having faith in self and never to lose hope untill the end of the last breath.

    thanks for sharing your ideas...keep writing !!!

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  2. Upon going through the your post, i said i won’t cry no matter how touching it may be to me.. but just before i finish reading, came the tears like a striking torn in my heart as they flood my cheek. The reason,,, i could relate with the message, which i realize those are the exact words that i was longing to say and the question keep banging on my mind "ARE YOU STILL THERE?"….

    THIS IS REALLY A TRULY AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL POST - A valuable piece of message for us to appreciate and to hold on. Its worth to wait, trust and believe......

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  3. Such wonderful thoughts. So succinct and yet poignant.
    Thanks you so much for sharing this....

    So beautiful!!!!!!!

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  4. love the phrase "ARE YOU STILL THERE" so much that i remember every word by heart and every lines in this amazing post.

    and yes,, love is magical that makes u feel you are on the zenith of ecstasy,, but when it is taken away from you,, there are no words to define the excruciating pain,,,,

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  5. i love every lines so much of this post...that i remember every word by heart,, every line in this amazing ,,,,,,,

    and yes,, love is magical that makes u feel you are on the zenith of ecstasy,, but when it is taken away from you,, there are no words to define the excruciating pain,,,,

    love it!!!

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  6. I admire your writings… i do! i especially fell in love with your idea in the quest of love.... you inspire me Sir!

    Good work!!

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  7. I am very impressed....so great ideas. seems like there is a subtle connections from your previous post "Sands of time".

    I love the title "ARE YOU STILL THERE".


    You are really good.

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  8. You know how to inspire people.

    Thank you for letting me know about these words. They made me smile again.

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  9. This is so lovely.... Thanks so much for sharing this.

    My tears didn't let me to finish it. Now i'm reading again.

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  10. Beautiful....i feel your longing in your poem...

    keep the faith....

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  11. your words are so beautiful and strong....just like those words i read, written by great philophers and poets...


    Please keep on posting beautiful thoughts.
    God Bless you.

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